Peer Review by CreativeAngel (United States)

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From sugar to salt

By: Pointless-Person-Parker


From sugar, to salt.
From going, to halt.
From unsteady, to level.
We are all equal in the eyes of the devil.

Message to Readers

This is just a little quote I made, and I really like it so far. I had wrote it in a story I am working on, and I put it here for you guys. ^~^

Peer Review

"We are all equal in the eyes of the devil" because it is a dramatic change with all this calm stuff and then devil pops up.

I am left with mixed feelings and not sure what the message or moral is.

What is the message of this? Is there a message?

Reviewer Comments

The words rhyming are really well done and i love the changes throughout the lines.