Peer Review by CreativeAngel (United States)

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From sugar to salt

By: Pointless-Person-Parker


FREE WRITING

From sugar, to salt.
From going, to halt.
From unsteady, to level.
We are all equal in the eyes of the devil.


Message to Readers

This is just a little quote I made, and I really like it so far. I had wrote it in a story I am working on, and I put it here for you guys. ^~^


Peer Review

"We are all equal in the eyes of the devil" because it is a dramatic change with all this calm stuff and then devil pops up.


I am left with mixed feelings and not sure what the message or moral is.


What is the message of this? Is there a message?


Reviewer Comments

The words rhyming are really well done and i love the changes throughout the lines.