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Message to Readers
This is just a little quote I made, and I really like it so far. I had wrote it in a story I am working on, and I put it here for you guys. ^~^
"We are all equal in the eyes of the devil" because it is a dramatic change with all this calm stuff and then devil pops up.
I am left with mixed feelings and not sure what the message or moral is.
What is the message of this? Is there a message?
The words rhyming are really well done and i love the changes throughout the lines.