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Exceptions. Deceptions. Corrections.

By: MollyPawGaming


FREE WRITING

You lie, I cry. We move on.
            Exception.
You manipulate, I retaliate. We move on.
            Deception.
You mess up, again and again, I correct.
            I move on.
            Correction.
 


Message to Readers

What do you think it means? If you guess right i will follow you.


Peer Review

"You mess up, again and again, I correct" because it shows the famous phrase practice makes perfect.


I feel like there is many mistakes but the mistakes are good for us. I realize that mistakes are what shape our lives.


What happened or where did the inspiration for this come from?


Reviewer Comments

I love ho it's so short but still rhymes.