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Exceptions. Deceptions. Corrections.

By: MollyPawGaming


You lie, I cry. We move on.
You manipulate, I retaliate. We move on.
You mess up, again and again, I correct.
            I move on.

Message to Readers

What do you think it means? If you guess right i will follow you.

Peer Review

"You mess up, again and again, I correct" because it shows the famous phrase practice makes perfect.

I feel like there is many mistakes but the mistakes are good for us. I realize that mistakes are what shape our lives.

What happened or where did the inspiration for this come from?

Reviewer Comments

I love ho it's so short but still rhymes.