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I am looking for very picky peer reviewing, please! This is probably going to be part 1 of a story that I may or may not continue, by the way. Thank you :)
The story is amazingly good definitely continue it!
I feel like a brand new happy start had begin.
Have you read Percy Jackson? Heroes of Olympus? Trials of Apollo? All those Greek/Roman mythology books?
Amazing please continue. You could definitely continue the stories from Heroes of Olympus if you wanted. ;D <3