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'She is the twilight The deadly eerie twilight hour' - It's hard to choose just one favorite line. ;) I love how you end on an 'eerie' note. You use vivid descriptions to give us a picture of the subject of this poem.
By using words such as 'twilight, eerie, silent, death, etc.' You do a great job of using your descriptions to draw me in and really tune into what's happening.
You did a fantastic job on this poem! I love the descriptions (as I'm sure you've guessed by now ;) ), and how you describe lady twilight grips your reader.
Please keep writing! You're doing great. :D