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The Twilight Hour

January 6, 2018

It is the twilight hour
The twilight hour,
The deadly eerie twilight hour,
The hour of which the forest glows violet
And creatures both big and small fall silent,
The hour of which a curse takes place
Leaving you in a void of empty space,
The hour of which the wise dread
And fools unite with their dead,
The hour of which you know to stay home
But curiosity lures you out to go roam,
The hour of which the towns people all fear
Only the brave peek for they dare,
The hour of which mystery hangs in the air
And children are told to always keep near,

A beautiful lady sweeps the valley 
As swift as the wind and as strong as a ralley,
She is cloaked in silks of purple sky
Her hair so black you know you will die,
One look is soul sucking
One touch inflicts death
It is the twilight
She is the twilight
The deadly eerie twilight hour
As a first poem I don't think this is sooooooo bad of a story, however it isn't that good either... owo
Still I hope you found this some what entertaining.
Thanks for reading!

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  • AlienFromPluto

    Oh wow, thx. X

    almost 3 years ago
  • JadeAndSerpentine

    This is great! You are so talented!

    almost 3 years ago
  • AlienFromPluto

    Thanks, your words of encouragement is much appreciated!

    over 3 years ago
  • Bellbell0307

    I love this! Keep up the great work I have faith in you!

    over 3 years ago
  • AbigailSauble

    Very good! You did a tremendous job drawing me into this! Keep up the fantastic work!
    God bless!

    over 3 years ago