camlily

United States

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I was kind of tying to compare this pimple to a guilty conscience... how well does it do this? What could I do better? Thank you for checking it out :)

Pimple

January 4, 2018

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There's a pimple growing on my skin.
A big, red bump
that's hard to conceal. 
I try to treat it,
Ignore it
But it's always there
Right under my nose
Growing bigger
And bigger.
A constant reminder 
of adolescence
And a painful bruise 
Smooth to the touch.
I hate pimples.

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4 Comments
  • Tushar Mandhan

    Your ;pimple' is so beautiful and interesting! Pun intended. XD


    12 months ago
  • CreativeAngel

    I think I have one rn too and it’s SOO ANNOYING LIKE AHH GET OFF ME


    about 2 years ago
  • CreativeAngel

    Pimples


    about 2 years ago
  • Deleted User

    Symbolism!


    over 2 years ago