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Message to Readers
I appreciate all comments and constructive criticism---thank you for your time, and please enjoy!
It's perfect. You don't need to change anything.
The stakes would be losing the stars. It matters so, so much! Stars are a beauty, and, as you say, "...the wonder to the heart, or the proof of the existence of God..." And THAT is beautiful.
The brilliant shining lights in the sky
I want to keep reading stories like this, that are beautiful and heart-touching.
This is beautiful! Keep writing, and I can't wait to read more!