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PROMPT: Album Review Competition 2018
Message to Readers
So... this story is not exactly what the others are like. I've checked the submitted stories but... they're not stories. They're all essays. Which makes me kind of nervous. I'll be honest, I wanted to do something different. The genre of this story was "Review," not "Essay." I wanted to be unique and this is what I came up with. Go ahead and review it honestly. Please, write comments about the actual story AND how it relates to the prompt. Thanks!
The author clearly shows how meaningful this album is by writing a wonderful story about how this artist might have impacted someone in their life.
It was clear to me because they added the English translation. The author had added the information in the Footnotes, that the artist is from a different culture.
Yes, the author's voice is TOTALLY original because they decided to write a story instead of a review. Isn't that what we're supposed to do as writers, write a story that draws the reader in?
Well, first of all... IT FRICKING KPOP! I love Kpop so I'll totally listen to it.
You are sooooooooooo good! I can't wait to read more of your jaw-dropping pieces!
I love your style of writing and how much work/emotion you put into your writing.