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" Jamie is rather rude to me. She won’t stop chasing me around the halls, and she always steals my toys. Why would she pick me though? It seems like she’s singling me out. I hope she stops. " This stuck out to me because it's bullying. Those bullies..... Not good people.
I am left with the feeling of curiosity.
How much better can your writing be? (This was meant as a compliment.)
Dude! You are amazing! Keep going. My awesome person of the day goes to you! Ha. I don't know what I'm going in my life........