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Any feedback is great.
There isn't really one line that stands out. All the lines kind of blend together and make the story all the better.
I am left feeling concerned and anxious. It really makes me want to know what happens next.
Are the grammar mistakes purposeful to show the education level of the character? Sometimes it's hard to understand what is trying to be said.
It's really good, although a little confusing at times, and it really makes me want to read more. Great!