Peer Review by Kaitlyn ❄ (United States)

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Curtains Closed

By: Nafo23


As the Curtains of Earth draw to a close and the final say is said
I'll do the things I've never dared, until I wind up dead.


Peer Review

I think the fact that you put "Curtains of Earth" the way you did, like a title. It just really stood out in a fabulous way. But I'd never thought of it like that. It's so strong and bold. It's so beautifully metaphorical.


I'm left thinking that, that is probably the best thing to do. To push your limits as far as you can is beautiful. Obviously, you just have a day left so if you want to try something out, you had better do that.


Reviewer Comments

This was beautiful Keep up the great writing.