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'Writing is reaching for the sky, and touching it' - I love this idea. It encompasses your other reasons really effectively. It's the idea that writing can help you to fulfil your ambitions and expectations and gives you the power you could never have in any other circumstance. It also exposes you to worlds of beauty that you would otherwise never have experienced.
Probably the idea that I'd be lost without writing. I've tried going without it and it always felt like I'd lost a particular part of my soul - it's really necessary for me to harness my ideas in writing and use them to remember myself. It's too easy to go without confronting oneself if one refuses to write, and I believe we should always challenge ourselves to become better. Writing is the ideal medium for this.
This was excellently written. You have an especially good ear for poetic phrases which you integrate really well into your text. All you might want to do with this would be to maybe rephrase some of the phrases I highlighted for clarity, as sometimes I lost your meaning. Otherwise, great work, and I hope to see more of your work on the site in future!