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All of the above!
It means special time with family.
It was a perfect scene, but I think if you enter this you may want to add a little reflection at the end.
It ended the story very well, but see above question and answer.
You can paint any picture you want when you write. I've read several of your stories, and you're also very good at gently introducing a belief to the reader and thoroughly explaining it. Keep it up!
I can totally relate to this piece! I'm the oldest of four, but I remember several years back, being woken up at four in the morning by an over excited younger sister. She couldn't fall asleep again, and we had almost five hours until we could get my parents up. I played Lalaloopsies for hours with her and we fantasized about our presents. Please review my December prompt story, Holiday Magic!