Dani A. Remlap

United States of America

-Senior (yes, really. I don't believe it either)
-Trying my best
-Ravenclaw for life
-Endlessly curious
-Self-proclaimed poet
-I just wanna help people.
-So. Many. Books. To. Read.

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Atlas's Poem

December 3, 2017


Roll your shoulders gently, dear
Careful, don't disturb the stars
I know the sky is heavy, dear
Holding it up is hard
Take another breath, dear
Quiet your aching heart

Don't let the sky fall, Atlas

Let your eyes fall shut
Forget the weight of heaven
Allow your mind to drift away
To that place between now and then
No one asked you to carry the sky
You shouldered the weight just the same
You must admit the irony
Carrying heaven has always been your hell

Don't let the sky fall, Atlas

I'm so sorry, my dear
For I know what your future holds
You won't buckle beneath the weight, dear
Instead, you'll turn to stone
You never really belonged, dear
Neither heaven nor hell has ever been home

Don't let the sky fall, Atlas


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  • Dani A. Remlap

    Thank you so much! Honestly this is one of my favorite pieces because it kinda just flowed from my pen. Writer-me knew what to do even if regular-me didn't, I guess XD

    over 2 years ago
  • LackingASocialLife

    This is so good! I love the sweet words used in the piece and how it's got a nice rhythm to it. It's really wonderful :D

    over 2 years ago
  • Kaitlyn ❄

    Thank you so much! That means tons to me! And same to you! Your last few pieces have been outstanding!

    over 2 years ago
  • Dani A. Remlap

    No problem. Btw, you're work is steadily improving (you were always good but you're definitely getting even better)

    over 2 years ago
  • Kaitlyn ❄

    Aww thank you!

    over 2 years ago
  • Dani A. Remlap

    Thank you so much! Comments and reviews like yours keep me going!

    over 2 years ago
  • Kaitlyn ❄

    Dude, I love ur writing! Keep it up!

    over 2 years ago