Peer Review by Lucy_Cerys (Australia)()

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your self

By: SACHIN22aug


FREE WRITING

there is no need to prove your self ,your perfection prove everything about you...


Peer Review

There is only one line however I like the words 'there is no need to prove yourself' as it's quite liberating in a way.


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Reviewer Comments

Please please check your grammar!! Other than that, well done - I thought it was admirable how you weren't afraid to publish such a short piece.