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There is only one line however I like the words 'there is no need to prove yourself' as it's quite liberating in a way.
Curiosity. What inspired this piece?
Are you talking about someone in particular or just in general?
Please please check your grammar!! Other than that, well done - I thought it was admirable how you weren't afraid to publish such a short piece.