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Message to Readers
CHAPTER NINE. I think. Sorry, I was in caps lock and didn't fell like re typing that. Anyway, peace (read in a deep voice for effect)!
"Congratulations! You just answered your own question. Fool. " I just find this line seriously hilarious!
I feel that the author can improve, I see the talent, but I don't see too much effort.
Have you always felt this way towards the people in your class, or was there a certain situation that made you feel this way?
As always, keep writing! I do, however, want to note that you have to pay attention to the grammar and spelling. Even a change in the smallest mistakes will make the writing profusely better!