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Message to Readers
Can you tell me what parts you skimmed and became bored, so I can cut those parts?
Wow! The tone of this piece was amazing!
The month of snow and Christmas
Yes, the ending was awesome. It was super to-the-point.
You are such an experienced writer and from that, you can only grow more.
I have a new idol for writing.