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I have no idea whether this is appealing or not. I'm stretching my style range, so any feedback is appreciated.
You only really used onomatopoeia once however the way it was repeated throughout to reinforce your message works rather effectively, mimicking the subject accurately.
Throughout this poem there is strong imagery connoting to crows and things associated with them; blackness and death for example, which is pretty neat. I like the last line (well almost last) - 'like little black annoying birds') because the syntax of the poem mirrors this closing sentence. The 'CAWS' in the poem represent those annoying birds as well as other messages to do with life and self-image (or at least, that's how my tired mind is reading it at the moment).
This is a really interesting and creative piece. Well done!