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Clare B

Canada

I'm currently in high school and I enjoy doing writing, journaling, reading, playing sports, playing guitar, crocheting, and musical theatre! I normally stick to writing short stories in the genre of fiction, but I also write poems every so often.

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Won't You Carry Me for Awhile?

November 28, 2017

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She felt as though she had been stumbling along for awhile. 
Evertime she would take a step 
ahead, something always pulled her backwards.
Bagage upon bagage had been 
piled on her shoulders. 
She dreamed for the veil that
clouded her mind to be lifted.
She dreamed to be able to pick herself back up, and run with life.
But that something never ceased to bring her back to old ways.
Never ceased to ruin her young life, to battle old enemies.
Every time she sank deeper into this cycle she would find her self asking;
wont you carry me for awhile? 
 

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7 Comments

  • Desiree

    PUBLISH MORE STUFF CLARE!
    But like seriously tho, do that


    over 1 year ago

  • Plausible.Poems

    Super thoughtful and well-written.


    over 1 year ago

  • Desiree

    I like it :D


    almost 2 years ago

  • Clare B

    Thank you!


    almost 2 years ago

  • Caitlin_S

    Good work, very relatable, it brings on emotion.


    almost 2 years ago

  • Clare B

    Very true, although this wasn't at was just about me, it was about a friends situation right now.


    almost 2 years ago

  • Aravis Tarkheena

    If you ever ask God to carry you, He will.


    almost 2 years ago