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Is there anything that could make this piece more effective? Should I spend more time on the second half than the first? I appreciate suggestions ;)
The tone and subject matter. Also the character's hope and perseverance
It means hope, even in the darkness
I like that the first half was story like and the second very reflective
Yes. It was the perfect end to this story
You have an amazing story here. I would love to read more stories of yours! Keep it up😁