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The unusual meaning of the tears. Normally, you would think that someone would cry on their last day of life because they won't get to live anymore. But the writer shows amazing courage and faith in the afterlife. Beautiful word choice!
I am left with a feeling of bravery, which I'm sure was ignited by the author's mood and tone.
The piece was really inspiring and simple, yet very deep. I think your word choice works terrifically with the context. Awesome Job!