Peer Review by Aaliyah (United States)

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Tears for the End

By: Poohbear


On the last day of the world I would cry.
Not because I would be sad or afraid, but because
I would know everything would be okay. 


Peer Review

The unusual meaning of the tears. Normally, you would think that someone would cry on their last day of life because they won't get to live anymore. But the writer shows amazing courage and faith in the afterlife. Beautiful word choice!


I am left with a feeling of bravery, which I'm sure was ignited by the author's mood and tone.


Reviewer Comments

The piece was really inspiring and simple, yet very deep. I think your word choice works terrifically with the context. Awesome Job!