Peer Review by AbigailSauble (United States)

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Tears for the End

By: Poohbear


PROMPT: On the Last Day of the World

On the last day of the world I would cry.
Not because I would be sad or afraid, but because
I would know everything would be okay. 

Peer Review

You're taking the stance of a Christian. :) Christians look forward to when Christ returns, almost everyone else is either in denial about it, or would cry from fear.

Joy! You strike simple, yet powerful emotions within this, which make me even more excited for the unknown day. :)

Reviewer Comments

Love how this is hopeful. :)
Keep writing!
God bless!