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Message to Readers
Let me know what you think! This is a blending of multiple versions of the same story. It's the same story my year by year prompt piece is based on, as well as my other work about the willow. Thanks for any help you can give me!
It's so hard to pick a favorite line. :) The ones that I highlighted are some of my favorites. But it'd take too much space to write down the ones that I love. The reason that I love them is because of the mood you create. (Which I talk about in the next section).
I got goosebumps after reading this. You create a wistful, beautiful, picturesque scene here! Nostalgic to the core.
I can't really present the feelings that I got while reading this. :) But you did a fantastic job with the emotions, descriptions, memories, and everything else! Please write more like this. You are a fantastic writer!
Keep it up!