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Message to Readers
All respectful comments are invited! If you think I need to be more specific, just let me know. Thank you for reading. I hope you have enjoyed this, and come again, sometime.
I would say, "There is an awesome poem that's really powerful about the loss of people and loved ones. I know it sounds sad, but it's really a great little read. It's crazy how much emotion goes into 12 lines of prose. It's powerful."
The biggest strength is the unique perspective on stars.
Nothing was lacking! This is an incredible piece and I hope you continue to privilege the WTW community with your writing!