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Thank you for reading! I hope this prose poem gives you comfort, and I hope you have an excellent day.
'There are baths of clear, mountain air, and aromas of fresh, wild grass.' - The lovely descriptions! It's so easy to see, and smell, and I'd love to go to this place. :)
By saying that this forest brings you comfort. I can also see the peace of this place by the descriptions. Out in nature is definitely where I can find peace. :)
You did a great job coming up with unique descriptions, and making me want to go there. ;) Really well done!