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Message to Readers
There are- consequences in life.
'I find peace in the rain-splattered panes' - I love it too. :) So it's easy to relate to. And it shows how much God is in control. (Of the weather). And everything else, really. He made the whole universe. ;)
By beginning each verse with 'I find peace'. It made me relax, and find peace in what you do. :)
You did a great job with the rhymes! Thanks for sharing your peace with me!
Have a great day!