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Lee Fudge

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Too Cool for School

November 7, 2017

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(I felt overconfident and wrote another song. This will be more terrible then the last.)


My mom got me some new shades,
Someome said they were cool.
And since I wear them, their coolness spread to me!
Now I'll go outside and cool things!
(I have to get home by eight thirty.)

I'm so cool, I went to the donut shop,
And got extra sprinkles. (Like Twenty!) 
I'm so cool, I'm to cool for school.
But I'm still going, because I need an education.

I feel so cool, I'll,ask a girl out,
and if says no, that's okay because I respect her opinion.
I feel so cool, I'll fly a kite.
I just found out that's an insult. (My mistake)

You know, I don't think I'm cool.
Maybe I'm just overconfident.

Oh man! I got to get to piano practice!



 

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5 Comments
  • No More Than Sam

    xD


    almost 2 years ago
  • Kaitlyn ❄

    I loved this one. It made me laugh. I take piano lessons. I really loved the "fly the kite" part and where you told yourself that was an insult. That was very very funny. Please keep writing more songs I really like them.


    almost 2 years ago
  • f l o r a

    This was funny..
    Make more please


    almost 2 years ago
  • -Foxmillionaire-

    Cool! this sounds like something Nigahiga would write. :) make more songs.


    almost 2 years ago
  • Glytch Montoya

    I can't tell if this one was supposed to be sarcastic funny or ironic funny. Either way, it was funny.
    ...WAIT!!! SARCASM IS A FORM OF VERBAL IRONY! I JUST SAID THE SAME THING TWICE!!!!!
    ...Thank you, English class, for teaching me that what I said was redundant.

    (I actually take piano lessons...)


    almost 2 years ago