Lee Fudge

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A Song From the Heart (But I Don't Have One)

November 7, 2017

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(This is a song. You can make up your on rhythm as you go along. Sorry if this isn't good.)

I want to make you happy.
I want to make you feel okay.
I want to write to write a song from the heart,
But I don't have one.

If you want to feel inspired,
Like the world is your clay.
If you want to feel not depressed,
Like there's a light a the end of a tunnel.
You won't feel that way.

Because I don't have a heart, 
When it comes to these to things.
I don't have a heart,
Like a politician.

You know maybe this song is a bit too negative.
I should make it a bit more positive.

Flowers, Puppies, Mortality! (Strike that last one.)
Positive enough for you? Good, cause I can't take much more.

I don't have a heart,
I got it removed with my tonsils.
I don't have a heart,
I shouldn't have to explain this.

Just so you know, the heart doesn't determine emotions,
That's your brain. (That's psychology!)

I don't have a heart,
I don't need to say it again. 
I don't have a heart,
Do you hate this yet?

Good, because it's over.


 

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4 Comments
  • .audrey michelle.

    Twisted and weird, but pleasing at the same time. Very well done!


    about 2 years ago
  • Kaitlyn ❄

    Really good.


    about 2 years ago
  • -Foxmillionaire-

    "Like the world is your clay" I love that line it's so artistic. It would be awesome to be able to form the world as if it was clay. Fix all the mistakes, and make it perfect. Nice job :)


    about 2 years ago
  • Glytch Montoya

    Immediate reaction after finishing reading this song: a smile and (quietly suppressed) laughter.

    This song reminds me of your other work. It's funny (in my opinion, at least), parts of it seem random enough to be interesting (but not random enough to be confusing), and it seems like the song is making fun of itself.

    Nice job.


    about 2 years ago