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I like the whole written piece in general, even though it's quite confusing. I love mysteries and I just wanted more and more to read.
I was left with the feeling of longing for more. I absolutely loved this piece, and I want more of it.
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This is a very well written mysterious piece of writing, and I absolutely loved it. I hope there is more on this because I need more, it's just too good.
Very well done!