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Nadia Kotova

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Drowning

November 3, 2017

I was drowning. 

I sank down in the lake, not being able to swim well enough to reach the surface. 

Thrashing blindly, I groped in panic for the unreachable surface, refusing to believe my last breath would consist of water and not air just as that of my sister Suzy who rested at the bottom of this very lake. 

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2 Comments
  • Nadia Kotova

    Thank you!


    6 days ago
  • ARS7

    Oh . . . this is sad. And reminds me of one of my compositions written awhile back. ;)
    Good descriptions!
    Keep writing!


    6 days ago