Dancing fingers

Kahasai

United States

I'm 17
I like to dream

Homeschooled
Maybe a fool

Trampolinist
and classical guitarist

Archer
Let us barter

Mountain girl
I like burl

River otter
Viking daughter

Wolfdog owner
Forest roamer

I'm no fighter
But I am a writer

Message to Readers

I realize the challenge isn't until August, but I thought I could post this anyways. If you have any critiques, questions, or comments, please tell me! I really want the feedback.

The Soldier's Story

November 2, 2017

There was dirt all around him. Clutched in his hand was a sword. What had happened?
    Drifts of memory came to him as he breathed dirt. People feared him. Hated him. He was a monster, wasn't he? Why was he a monster? Because he had killed some folk?
    No, because he had destroyed a kingdom. On his own. How?
    Through the pure force of his will and anger.
    In the end, the King of the Morning Star had killed him. He would forever be known as a monster. But he had won. He had died, but he also won.

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4 Comments
  • Kahasai

    Thanks!


    over 1 year ago
  • AbigailSauble

    Intriguing. :) Great work!


    over 1 year ago
  • -Foxmillionaire-

    I also love art, archery, bacon, and gaming :)


    almost 2 years ago
  • Glytch Montoya

    What does this remind me of...?
    Hmm...

    (Good work, by the way.)


    almost 2 years ago