I'd like to know if there's anything that I could improve in structuring this poem (Lines per stanza-wise - is this appropriate?). I wasn't really thinking about how I wanted to structure it when I wrote it, I just kind of wrote the ideas as they flushed my mind. Feedbacks on the kinds of analogies and metaphors that I've used would also be welcome (I feel like I built off from various analogies and I'd like to narrow down the focus of the poem). I'm also curious to know how you interpreted it. Thanks so much! :)