Peer Review by Bellbell0307 (United States)

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Flames

By: korra4life


PROMPT: On the Last Day of the World

No matter the flames that engulf the land,
my first thought would be to never let go of your hand.

Peer Review

This statement is soo powerful!

I'm left with the feeling of awe.

Reviewer Comments

You did really good. I love how this rhymes! Keep up the great work!