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I beg your pardon if my speech give the shadow of offence <3
It makes it motivational. It would be easy for it to sound selfish in the first person (I wouldn't read that way, but it might come across that way to others.)
Everything. It's perfect. It's what happens every day, and it drives me insane, and I could read about it forever because wow. Someone else understands it. I needed this piece, and I can't wait to read more of your writing.
Your username and picture are honestly beautiful.