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Lee Fudge

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The Mercenary That Couldn't Feel Pain: Prolouge

October 25, 2017

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Filialisa Fields, 1668 Before Great War.

Nine bodies laid on the field, only six would be taken off. One man was standing in the field, in front of a group of a five.

One of the men laughed and said,"You comrades are so tough, eh?"

The man not affiliated with these men was silent, they noticed something about him, and that was that fact a knife was in him.

"Ha! That knife will end you before we will!" The man said, the other men joining in his laughter.

"Kinfe?" The man in the field said.

"Ja!" The man said in his northern accent,"The knife right there,"

He pointed at the glittering knife, the man not affliliated with the other man looked at it, and pulled it out.

"You mean this knife?" The man said.

".....You have a death wish, lad?" The Northerner look genuinely worried.

The man examined the knife.

"...Its a nice knife," He said throwing in the air.

The Northerners were silent.

"Let's see if make people bleed," The man said.

He then threw the knife at one of the men, a direct hit. He fell to the ground, in shock of what happened. The man had encountered a rare site.

A man that couldn't feel pain.

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5 Comments
  • Glytch Montoya

    From the beginning, you said you wanted to write some darker stuff...
    ...Here we are.
    (Great work, by the way. It's dark, yet still kinda humorous.)


    over 1 year ago
  • No More Than Sam

    Will there be a sequel? I liked it.


    over 1 year ago
  • -Foxmillionaire-

    Yep :)


    over 1 year ago
  • Lee Fudge

    Hope you like it though.


    over 1 year ago
  • -Foxmillionaire-

    Whoa a lot darker then ya other stuff


    over 1 year ago