Peer Review by Suri Purefoy (United States)

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By: Grace Hammond

She likes to separate herself from the mundane through the versatility of her pity. 

Peer Review

I think the words "separate" and "pity" really made a break-through in, perhaps, the character's emotions.

That's a tricky one. I think I would let her decide what we should do.

Reviewer Comments

I really enjoyed this piece. Great job!