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AbigailSauble

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Chased

October 24, 2017

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Did I hear something? Or is my mind playing tricks on me? 
   Tatum paused from her position in the darkness; flattened against the siding of a house. She held her breath. 
Crickets chirped steadily, a bat flew wildly across the path of the half moon. And leaves quietly crunching continued. They stopped, then went on. Nearer, nearer. 
   Tatum wanted to scream, run, anything but stay there paralyzed. She frantically searched her surroundings; mere forms though they were. Then she realized that the footfalls had ceased. What should I do? 
   Suddenly the moonlight was snuffed out as a cloud passed across it. NO! NO! NO! Tatum's senses went into overdrive as fear replaced the shredded nerves she had left. Then icy fingers curled around her arm. Tatum screamed. The touch of someone else burned like fire. 
   "Be quiet." A voice hissed. She knew that voice and trembled. "My dear Tatum, why are you afraid? Don't you know all the fun that we're going to have?" There was an evil chuckle. 
   No. Tatum pleaded, knowing that no one could save her now. 
Sharp, cold metal pressed against her throat, blocking her voice. 
   "Come with me, my dear. I'm looking forward to this." 

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4 Comments
  • AbigailSauble

    Mwahahaha! :P Yes, I have noticed. ;)


    almost 2 years ago
  • Victoria Penning

    WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!! I need to know what happens next! In case you haven't noticed, I don't do so great with cliff hangers. ;D


    almost 2 years ago
  • AbigailSauble

    Thank you. ;) That was my intention.


    almost 2 years ago
  • Aravis Tarkheena

    Very melodramatic.


    almost 2 years ago