elisa

United States

fifteen
dreaming of goddesses, sunflowers and italian sunshine.

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October 22, 2017

the night sky is dotted with stars.

the sky looks like someone tossed salt onto a black mantel; the world is dark and the stars twinkle overhead.

i lean back, eyes fixed on the sky above me. memories flood my mind of previous nights. she's beside me; she knows. we can feel the stars burning up above us. the world is at peace.

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  • rainandsonder

    These descriptions are really good. Great work!


    over 2 years ago
  • Quilling Leaves

    This description has come far from the first. Good job! I like how you added characters.


    over 2 years ago