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how can i choose one? it'd probably be either "every bone in my body wants to be close to her, and it doesn't matter that i'm wearing a short sleeve shirt and the wind is turning my cheeks red, because god, this is paris, and i'm holding hands and running through the streets with the prettiest girl i've ever seen and life feels like a dream." or "the sun sets the eiffel tower on fire as we watch, and when she turns to kiss me she tastes like marshmallows. paris is beautiful, sure, but it doesn't compare to her." first, the first one because i can feel your passions and emotions through your words for this girl! i love it! second, the second one has some super powerful imagery that i really like!
one of the best days of your life is spending moments with this girl, which i think says a lot about you! this is really cute and sweet. this is incredible. this piece blew my mind. just. wow.
you have some powerful imagery that really helps me imagine the scene and the events. man, i really want to go to paris now. and this girl sounds beautiful and amazing? such wow. anyway, nice work! :)