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"because god, this is paris,"
It captures your sudden realisation and appreciation of where you are in the world and the moment you're in, and makes the whole thing seem more dreamy to the reader.
You've said in the footnotes that you have described the best day of your life, and so it tells the reader that you have a very positive outlook on life, as when asked to describe one moment that sums up your entire life, you chose the best one you could think of.
I couldn't help but smile when I was reading this - it's a dreamy yet dynamic piece and you've found the perfect balance between description and action. Well done :)