Kaitlyn ❄

United States of America

PSEO student at CLC
Work at Nelson Shine Produce
I love farming
Luv my bestie Hadley

Message to Readers



October 29, 2017

1. Jenna put all she had into the race yet still failed.

2. Jenna pumped her legs - sure she couldn't try any harder. Her heart broke when she saw she was in second place by 0.03 seconds.

3. Jenna threw her self forward putting her entire soul into the race. She inched forward and crossed the line - sure she had won. She looked over at the bright red letters. She had heart-breakingly lost by 0.03 seconds. She looked over at the person who had won - her arch enemy. Taylor tauntingly smirked.


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  • Kaitlyn ❄

    Thank you tons!!!!

    over 2 years ago
  • Dani A. Remlap

    Wow. This is great.

    over 2 years ago
  • Kaitlyn ❄

    Thank you both. I'm really glad you guys like this piece.

    over 2 years ago
  • AbigailSauble

    Really well done! I read the first part and thought: "Ooh . . . that's so sad." ;)
    Keep writing!
    God bless!

    over 2 years ago
  • rainandsonder

    This got a lot better from the first draft to the third one. Great work!

    over 2 years ago