Sasha K. Lotnikee

United States

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Walking Down the Hallway

June 5, 2014

Zoom! The girl with the rolling backpack... I walk past an open classroom. "But Mr. Young, my dog ate my homework!..." I meet a mob of yelling students. "Do you think I'll make the audition?..." "Jenny won't talk to me anymore..." "Why can't I wear this hat in class?..." "Mrs. Martinez assigned us way too much homework..." Splash! The secretary spilled her coffee. Her heels clack as she runs to the janitor's closet. I hear a long buzz in an office. "Jack Johnson's lunch is by the front desk." I turn and saunter down the empty hallway. And then I only hear one sound and it is Silence.


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