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she reaches out, as if she's going to touch the distant sunset, hold the falling sky. It really is a beautiful picture. You painted a fantastic picture in my mind. I love the thought of 'the falling sky'.
Very very homey. This chapter is very sweet and you give it a very calm sweet feeling.
I don't really have a question tbh.
<3 this so much.