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Message to Readers
Any feedback is welcomed. Thanks for reading my prologue and God bless.
The line that stands out the most is by far the three lines. because it is descriptive and conveys a very dark and ominous mood.
I am left with a feeling of intrigue because I want to know about what happens next! Who is the person in the cargo hold? Why could he resist the sirens? What power does he have that's so dangerous? Great job!
What inspired you to write this and are you planning on making this a novel or a short story?
Other than minor grammatical errors -I would mark them with comments but my computer is being stupid- I think it was very good. I think you could work with the syntax a bit to combine some sentences as they can be a bit short at points, but this is kind of nit picky. I think that this piece has a lot of potential and you should be proud of it. Good job!