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Do tell, what impression do you get of these characters? Please, enjoy!
I really love the second line, especially the reveal that they're for a butterfly. You get the sense he's incredibly sensitive and thoughtful to the point of child-like naivety.
The butterfly boy? Sure. He seems like the sort who always knows who's missing from class and believes that everybody has a role to play.
Now the boy with fierce faith in justice? Nope, he sounds very intense, like he has an overwhelming sort of personality.
How close am I with my guesses? :)