Peer Review by AbigailSauble (United States)

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Dawn

By: Valleman


FREE WRITING

Dawn
A sun washed over the mountains
Bathing the sky in orange.
The clouds turned into glaciers
In the hollowing light of the sun.


Peer Review

'The clouds turned into glaciers' - I've never heard this description before. But it was well-thought, and provides a neat picture!


Awe. Nature is so amazing! I often think about the clouds, and how neat it is that they're just gathered moisture, yet they reflect the color of the sunrise/sunset. God is amazing. :)


Was this the sunrise this morning where you live? :)


Reviewer Comments

Well thought-out! I often don't think about sunrises being orange, but it's true that that's one of the more common colors.
Good job!
God bless!