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Message to Readers
This is one of my first poems. Hope you guys like it!
When it should have learned That birds with broken wings, Only fall.' - This is great because we all feel like this one time or another, but with God all things are possible. Even for those of us who feel like we can't get back up again without hurting ourselves.
Hopeful, peaceful, exhilarated! You did a magnificent job on this your first poem! It's awesome when I find Christians on this sight, and can read their compositions. :) You did a great job showing us the hope of Christ, and I loved your analogies.
How close is this to your own conversion experience? If I had come to know Christ in my teen years, then this would probably have been close to what I was like, but God knew what was best. :) Continue in the grace of the LORD!
Wow! Superb! Described the feeling of before and after a conversion experience really well!
This is probably one of my favorite poems. Really well done!