Starborne Scrolls

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Before bed, think of something good that happened today. You'll end up realizing that, maybe, your bad day wasn't so bad at all.

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All That Matters

October 8, 2017

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YOU WILL NEVER SUCCEED!

So close.
That's what I am.
Just a few more steps.

YOU ARE UNLOVED!

I can endure it.
I must.
For Him.

YOUR EFFORT IS FUTILE!

This is the only way.
I know it.
I can take the torture.

DENY HIM BEFORE IT IS TOO LATE!

I can't give up.
Not now.
Not after I've come so far.

YOU KNOW YOU WILL FAIL!

Will I?
I don't know.
I stumble.

YES! YOU TREMBLE BEFORE ME!

Never.
I rise.
But I'm not alone this time.

WHAT? NO!

We have beaten you.
We have succeeded.
We are victorious.

.  .  .

All that matters?
I am His.
And He is mine.
I edited this one since the first I posted, so that the "He" referred to is Christ. I also think what I've changed helps it flow better. The normal words are what the main character is saying. The italicized words are the main character's thoughts. The bold, capitalized words are what the antagonist is saying. Hope that helps!
Thanks and God bless,
Starborne Scrolls

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4 Comments

  • RedWriter

    Really neat.


    over 3 years ago

  • Starborne Scrolls

    Thanks! I took the picture at just about the most random moment possible XD


    over 3 years ago

  • Deleted User

    Oh and I like your avatar


    over 3 years ago

  • Deleted User

    Wow pretty epic piece


    over 3 years ago