Starborne Scrolls

United States

Before bed, think of something good that happened today. You'll end up realizing that, maybe, your bad day wasn't so bad at all.

Message to Readers

This is my first piece published. I appreciate all feedback, constructive criticism, and comments!
Thanks!

All That Matters

October 6, 2017

FREE WRITING

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So close.
That's what I am.
Just a few more steps.


YOU WILL NEVER SUCCEED!

I can endure it.
I must.
For him.


YOUR EFFORT IS FUTILE!

This is the only way.
I know it.
I can take the torture.


GIVE UP BEFORE IT IS TOO LATE!

I can't give up.
Not now.
Not after I've come so far.


YOU KNOW YOU WILL FAIL!

Will I?
I don't know.
I stumble.


YES! YOU ARE FAILING!

Not anymore.
I rise.
He and I emerge, together.


WHAT? NO!

I have beaten you.
We have succeeded.
You are
defeated.

.  .  .

All that matters?
I am his.
And he is mine.
This is my first work on this site. I appreciate all feedback, constructive criticism, and comments! The normal words are what the main character is saying. The italicized words are the main character's thoughts. The bold, capitalized words are what the antagonist is saying. Hope that helps!
Thanks and God bless,
Starborne Scrolls

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3 Comments
  • Starborne Scrolls

    Thanks!


    over 3 years ago
  • Glytch Montoya

    In the end, when the protagonist succeeds in spite of the hardships and pain, the antagonist is left speechless...
    ...As am I.

    Great work!


    over 3 years ago
  • -Foxmillionaire-

    I love how the person rises from weakness


    over 3 years ago