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Lee Fudge

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Camp Yougonnadie - The First Death

October 5, 2017

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Later some campers were beating up another camper.

"I'll tell Dan and Stan!" The victim, named James said.

"Oh? How are you going to tell them if can't find them?" The main bully, named Jack said.

"Uh, were right here," Dan said.

Jack and his friends were shocked, because he and Stan just appeared out of nowhere. All the campers were staring at them, waiting to see if they would be ended.

"What are you gonna do end us?" Jack asked in mock southern accent.

Then Dan picked one of Jack's friends, and ripped his arm off like it was paper.

"Oooo, good one Dan!' Stan said. The campers were horrified.

"How did you-" Jack began.

"We're robots" Dan said.

"I'm MK. 7," Stan said.

"And I'm MK. 8," Dan said.

"And we're Helvectica Assaination Robots!" They both said.

Jack looked at them, waiting for them to do something. The Stan ran up to him and punted hi to other side of the camp. The final friend was picked up and thrown at the flag pole.

"Amd that," Stam said,"Is what we mean by ended."
 
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3 Comments
  • Glytch Montoya

    Oh. I have a friend who is always guessing mine LITERALLY A FRACTION OF A SECOND before I'm about to tell him!


    almost 2 years ago
  • Lee Fudge

    No, you are just good a t guessing my plots.


    almost 2 years ago
  • Glytch Montoya

    Seriously, am I inspiring these?! It seems like every time I ask a question in the comments, you answer it in your next story!

    (Oh, and great work, of course.)


    almost 2 years ago